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IELTS Writing Course Note 02 Opinion Essay

How to write the Expanded Paragraph in IELTS Opinion Essay

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Write first sentence of paragraph

1+2+1 Lopsided

  • First, one argument for / in favour of X is…
  • Second, another argument for / in favour of X is…

1+2+1 Neutral

  • First, one argument for / in favour of X is…
  • However, one argument against X is…

Replace

Argument

  • reason
  • point

Whole sentence

  • there be

    However, there are also arguments against X.
    However, there are also counterargument to X.

  • X can also bring benefit / harmful impact to…

    • usage: MUST NOT in first paragraph

Needed Pronoun

  • this
    • use alone: refers to whole sentence
    • this + special content: refers to special detail
  • that
    • do not use
  • these
    • refers to plural noun
  • those
    • those + who…: This can lead to a widening of the gap between those who have the access to the internet and those who do not.
  • such
    • similar to this but cannot refers to whole sentence, such = this + those
    • usage
      • such + plural noun: such approaches
      • such + a / an + singular noun: such an approach
      • such + adj. + noun: such helpful approaches
  • so

Logic chain writing: Conditional relationships

if

Recycling of waste is made mandatory by law. This can drive people to comply.
If recycling of waste is made mandatory by law, people will comply.

  • replace IF
    • provided that
    • on condition that
  • extend the logic chain
    • If SVO, SVO, leading to…
    • If A occurs, but not -A, then B occurs. Conversely, B does not occur.
      • e.g.: If the recycling of waste is made mandatory by law, people are more likely to comply.
      • e.g.: If the recycling of waste is made mandatory by law, rather than through willingness, people are more likely to comply. Otherwise, the waste will be disposed in a careless manner.
  • Only if / As long as

No matter what

  • replace
    • when
    • where
  • examples
    • People can easily find information they need on the internet, no matter what their field of study is.
    • People can easily find information they need on the internet no matter / regardless of their field of study.

Whether

  • examples
    • People can easily find information they need on the internet, whether their field of study is art or science.
    • People can easily find information they need on the internet regardless of their field of study, whether they are major in science, art, or any other subjects.
  • whether be
    • … whether it (should) be in science…
    • be it in science, art, or…

Extend logic chain

  • A can do X. -> A can do X. In particular / especially, A1, can do better.
  • A can do X. -> A can do X. In particular, A1, who / which has certain characteristic, more likely to do X.
  • A can do X. -> This is especially true / beneficial / harmful for A1. + who + certain characteristic

Write overview

Part

  1. synonymic rewriting the topic
  2. write general view

Argumentative topics

  • Attitudes are given for each of the two branches of opinion.
  • First, write disagree branch, then, write agree branch.

Attention: There is no need to repeat the topic, because they are merge with each other.

  • Example

    While learning about local history is beneficial for students, I believe that being knowledgable of world history is also necessary in the modern age.

Write ending

  • same as Lesson1
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