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IELTS Writing Course Note 03 Discuss Essay

How to write the Expanded Paragraph in IELTS Discuss Essay

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Segmentation method

  1. Stating the first preconceived idea.
  2. Stating the second preconceived idea.
  3. Give our own opinion.

Write sub-argument paragraph first sentence

  • First, some people argue that + first preconceived idea.

    • To begin with, they believe that…
    • For another, they also claim that…
  • However, other people argue that + second preconceived idea.

  • On the one hand, it could be argued by other people that…

  • On the other hand, a different perspective / proponent / opponent is held by others who believe that…

Use persona

People

  • first person: we
  • third person: people / individuals / everyone

Specific people

  • avoid singular person

Logic chain writing: Enumeration

Grammar rules

  • 2 items tied: A and B
  • 3 items tied: A, B, and C
  • Attention
    • Instead of using etc., use and other X (related) Sth.
    • e.g.: obesity, heart diseases, and other health related issues.

Connect

  • such as
    • I don’t like people such as him.
    • I like my pets, such as the white dog and black cat.
  • include
    • SVO, including A, B, and C
    • SVO. This may / can include A, B, and C
  • A and B are two ways
    • Encouraging innovation and investing in education are two possible ways.
  • :
    • SVO: SVO.
    • SVO: noun.
    • SVO: A, B, and C.
    • A, B, and C – C.
  • ,
    • SVO, SVingO. / Error e.g.: SVO, SVO. (run-on)
  • imaging (imperative sentence)
    • Imaging + Noun.

    e.g.: Imaging a student, who..

    • Imaging that + sentence.

    e.g.: Imaging that a literature student…

  • while

Logic chain writing: Concession

  • although / while
    • Although SVO, SVO.
  • in spite of / despite / notwithstanding
    • despite noun, SVO.
    • despite the fact that + Homophobic clauses, SVO.
  • nonetheless / nevertheless
  • admittedly
    • Admittedly / we need to admit that…
    • It is true that…
    • There is no denying that…

Write First and Ending paragraph

First sentence

  • There are two different perspectives regarding X.
  • There has been a conflict about X.

Give opinion

  • I am more inclined to agree with A.
  • I have a stronger inclination towards concurring with A.
  • I believe there is a way to resolve this conflict.
  • I believe a resolution to this conflict can be achieved.
  • In my opinion, X can also bring benefits / harmful impacts to…
  • In my opinion, there are other positive / negative impacts of X to consider.
  • In my opinion, while X may have negative effects, they can be overcome with solutions.
  • I hold the view that both opinions all have their merits. Form my perspective, there are benefits to be found in both opinions.

e.g.: In conclusion, while advertising have some drawbacks, since it can bring positive effects to the economy, including promoting both innovation and employment, I believe it is generally beneficial to the society as a whole.

e.g.: In my opinion, while advertisement may have fore mentioned negative effects, solutions are available to overcome these issues. In conclusion, despite the harmful effects of some types of advertisement, I believe that the government can take appropriate measures to address these issues and ensure that advertising is conducted in a responsible and beneficial manner for the public.

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